ext_30060 ([identity profile] rei-c.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] alyndra 2016-05-21 05:29 am (UTC)

Oh my god, this was perfect. I love the way you've set this up, with Amelia and Sam's thoughts first, before they get together, so there's this really perfect idea of why they're making the choices they are. The way they talk to each other -- so many secrets, on both sides, for so long -- and the sex, the darkness that's in both of them, the way they're both so free in admitting how fucked up they are, man. I just -- this is some perfect characterisation right here.

Thank you for writing and posting!

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